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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts illustrate statistics about 5 different sources of produced energy in France over the period from 1995 to 2005. At the first glance, it is obvious that, while coal sector dominated in energy generation in France, “other” sources of energy shared the least proportion over the given period. Turning to the details, it is clear that, coal and gas segments were the largest energy suppliers in France, meanwhile, these segments experienced slight increase, to be more precise, approximately 30% of energy was produced from these sources during the showed period. In the same way, the proportion of generated energy from ‘others’ segment almost doubled accounting for 9. 10 % in 2015. Similarly, nuclear sector also witnessed a significant rise in energy production, accounting for about 6% in 1995 increased to roughly 10%. On the other hand, it was only petro sector which showed a downward trend in France over the given decade. The proportion of generated energy from petro segment was almost equal to gas sector in 1995. But, petro segment was the third biggest energy supplier in 2015 accounting for almost 20%.
The two pie charts illustrate statistics about 5
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sources of produced
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energy
in France over the period from 1995 to 2005.

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first
glance, it is obvious that, while coal
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sector
dominated in
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energy
generation in France, “other” sources of
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energy
shared the least proportion over the
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period.

Turning to the
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, it is
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that, coal and gas
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segments
were the largest
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energy
suppliers in France, meanwhile, these
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segments
experienced slight increase, to be more precise, approximately 30% of
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energy
was produced
from these sources during the
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showed
period.
In the same way
, the proportion of generated
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from ‘others’
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segment
almost doubled accounting for 9. 10 % in 2015.
Similarly
, nuclear
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sector
also
witnessed a significant rise in
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energy
production, accounting for about 6% in 1995 increased to roughly 10%.

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, it was
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petro
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sector
which
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showed
a downward trend in France over the
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decade. The proportion of generated
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energy
from petro
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was almost equal to gas
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in 1995.
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, petro
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segment
was the third biggest
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supplier in 2015 accounting for almost 20%.

IELTS academic The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

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