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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The bar charts illustrate comparable information related to pineapple exports by three countries in the top three pineapple-producing between 2009 and 2019 while the pie chart gives data on the cost to the customer of each pineapple in 2019. Overall, country A was the highest pineapple exports in 2019 among the three countries and the percentage of distribution and retail predominated at the same time. As is presented, country A exported only 1 million over a decade the numerous accounted for over 10 millions. By contrast, the proportion of pineapple exports in country B dropped by the time, 4. 5 millions in 2009 and 1. 8 millions in 2019, respectively. Country C was the lowest country, that has increased slightly, not surpassing 1 millions. It is obvious that the ratio of distribution and retail was largest, approximately 35 percent. With 18 percent, Profit was the second largest. Export costs was exactly 4 percent and that was 1 percent lower than that of producer.
The bar charts illustrate comparable information related to pineapple
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by three
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in the top three pineapple-producing between 2009 and 2019 while the pie chart gives data on the cost to the customer of each pineapple in 2019.
Overall
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A was the highest pineapple
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in 2019 among the three
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and the percentage of distribution and retail predominated at the same time.

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A exported
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over a decade the numerous accounted for over 10
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. By contrast, the proportion of pineapple
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in
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B dropped by the time, 4. 5
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in 2009 and 1. 8
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in 2019,
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C was the lowest
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, that has increased
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, not surpassing 1 millions.

It is obvious that the ratio of distribution and retail was largest, approximately 35
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. With 18
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, Profit was the second largest.
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costs was exactly 4
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and that was 1
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lower than that of producer.

IELTS academic The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

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