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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

the bar chart delineates how the temperatures and hours of daylight of 2 cities of 2 countries ( United Kingdom and Australia) during the same weekend in December 2018. Generally, the temperature in Sydney is warmer than in London and the day in Sydney is also longher than in London at the same time. As is presented in the illustrate, the amount of temperature in Sydney incresed steadily during 3 days of the weekend while that was fluctuation in London. The maximum temperature of Sydney is 3 times higher than in London on Friday 28th and on Sunday 30th. In addition to, the minimum temperature of Sydney reached from 17 percent to 19 percent while that was in London only from 4 percent to 5 percent. Interestingly, the warmest day in Sydney was Sunday with 31 percent while the warmest day in Londay was 13 percent. The day in London lasted 7 hours from 8. 05 am to 15. 57 pm whereas the daytime in Sydney was much longer Sydney lasted 15 hours from 5. 45 am to 20. 06 pm.
the bar chart delineates how the
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and hours of daylight of 2 cities of 2 countries ( United Kingdom and Australia) during the same weekend in December 2018.
Generally
, the
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temperature
in Sydney is warmer than in London and the day in Sydney is
also
longher than in London at the same time.

As
is presented
in the illustrate, the amount of
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temperature
in Sydney incresed
steadily
during 3 days of the weekend while that was fluctuation in London. The maximum
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temperature
of Sydney is 3 times higher than in London on Friday 28th and on Sunday 30th.
In addition
to, the minimum
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of Sydney reached from 17
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to 19
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while that was in London
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from 4
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to 5
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.
Interestingly
, the warmest day in Sydney was Sunday with 31
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while the warmest day in Londay was 13 percent.

The day in London lasted 7 hours from 8. 05 am to 15. 57 pm whereas the daytime in Sydney was much longer

Sydney lasted 15 hours from 5. 45 am to 20. 06 pm.

IELTS academic The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

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