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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

Information about household spending in district in 1950 and 2010 respectively is compared by the two pie charts. The units are measured in percentages. Overall, it can be obviously seen that housing was the leader in the first year, and health care took the last place at the end of the given time. Turning to details, the most expensive was housing in 1950, with almost a seven in ten. The second most expensive was food, where it costs 11. 2%. Education was twice as expensive as transportation, at 6. 6 and 3. 3 % in turn. The next was most of the cost of the other. The least most expensive was health care, with 2. 2%. By contrast, after 61 years all values had changed. Housing decreased by three times. Food costs had been changed increased by three times. In third place were costs for other. The value of transport was bigger, than it was in 1950, with 14%. The next most expensive was education, at 6. 3%. The least cost of health care as in 1950, approximately one in twenty.

Information about household spending in district in 1950 and 2010 respectively
is compared
 by the two pie charts. The units are measured
 in percentages.

Overall
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 time.

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 was food, where it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
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 of the other. The least most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcostlyfancyhighlavishvaluableextravagant
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 was health care, with 2. 2%.

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. Housing decreased by three times. Food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
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expensive
 was education, at 6. 3%. The least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
cost
 of health care as in 1950, approximately one in twenty. 