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The diagram below show the life cycle of cotton t-shirt.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing cotton t-shirt. Overall, there are nine main stages in the life cycle of cotton t-shirt, beginning with cotton cultivation, ending with reuse, recycle, or reduce. At the first step of the process, the cotton trees are cultivated and in the harvest, the cotton is collected and transported to a factory. In there, the cotton is eaten, slept and played before they are woven into cotton t-shirt. After that, the cotton t-shirt is dried, washed and rinsed. By the fifth stage, the complete cotton t-shirt is delivered by ship to a place where packages and markets the product. The product are stored and detailed to the consumer. After the product are not in use, they can reduce, reuse or recycle.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing cotton
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t-shirt
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Overall
, there are nine main stages in the life cycle of cotton
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t-shirt
, beginning with cotton cultivation, ending with reuse, recycle, or
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reduce
. At the
first
step of the process, the cotton trees
are cultivated
and in the harvest, the cotton
is collected
and transported to a factory. In there, the cotton
is eaten
, slept and played
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before
they
are woven
into cotton
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t-shirt
. After that, the cotton
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t-shirt
is dried
, washed and rinsed. By the fifth stage, the complete cotton
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t-shirt
is delivered
by ship to a place where packages and markets the product. The product
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are
stored and detailed to the consumer. After the product are not in
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use
, they can
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reduce
, reuse or recycle.
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