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The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

The chart illustrates the number of trips made by children traveling to and from school using five means of transport (car, walking, cycling, walking and bus, and bus) in a particular country in the years 1990 and 2010. Units are measured in millions. Overall, travelling by walking, cycling, walking and bus, and bus decreased over the period given, while for car, the number number surged. Initially, walking was the most popular way to journey to and from school, whcih was replaced by riding a car in 2010, in contrary to how it was in 1990. In terms of riding a car, children made slightly over 4 million trips in 1990 as opposed to in 2010, with around 11 million trips. On the other hand, the number of trips by foot witnessed a drastic downfall throughout the years. Children travelled minutely under 13 million times by walking in 1990, before reaching a slump of 6 million trips in 2010. Similarly to walking, the three modes of transport experienced a decrease, in varying degrees. Out of the three, cycling, which was previously used to make just over 6 million trips, declined the most to reach a low 2 million, making it the least frequently used transport in 2010. Following cycling, walking and bus suffered a considerable fall by about 3 million. Bus seemed to have seen the least change, moderately dropping by approximately 2 million from 1990 to 2010.
The chart illustrates the
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made by children traveling to and from school using five means of transport
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(car
, walking,
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cycling
, walking and bus, and bus) in a particular country in the years 1990 and 2010. Units
are measured
in millions.

Overall
, travelling by walking,
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cycling
, walking and bus, and bus decreased over the period
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car
, the
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surged.
Initially
, walking was the most popular way to journey to and from school,
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whcih
was replaced
by riding a
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car
in 2010, in contrary to how it was in 1990.

In terms of riding a
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, children made
slightly
over 4
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million
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trips
in 1990 as opposed to in 2010, with around 11
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million
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trips
.
On the other hand
, the
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of
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trips
by foot witnessed a drastic downfall throughout the years. Children travelled
minutely
under 13
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million
times by walking in 1990,
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before
reaching a slump of 6
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trips
in 2010.

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to walking, the three modes of transport experienced a decrease, in varying degrees. Out of the three,
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cycling
, which was previously
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to
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make
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over 6
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million
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trips
, declined the most to reach a low 2
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million
, making it the least
frequently
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used
transport in 2010. Following
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cycling
, walking and bus suffered a considerable fall by about 3
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. Bus seemed to have
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seen
the least
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change
,
moderately
dropping by approximately 2
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million
from 1990 to 2010.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

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