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The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total

The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total MMLyN
The two pie charts illustrate the total proportion of the seven continents regarding the area and the existing population. Overall, the most significant facts to emerge from the charts are that asia accounts for not only the largest population but also the largest continent in the world, compared to the other continents. On the other hand, the continents of oceania and antarctica take up the least land area and population in the world, respectively. while asia is a continent constituting 30% of the world land area, over three-fifths of the world population living there, showing that it is the widest and over-populated continent in the world. The second-largest continent is Africa with 20% of the world land area in which 15% of the population of the world settling. The third-largest continent in the world is North america at 16% where includes 16% of the world population. Whereas Europe constitutes just a seven-percent area of the world land, it accounts for nearly two times higher than that in the amount of population, representing one of the most densely populated areas in the world. while, however, 12 percent point of the world's land area belongs to South america, it includes just 5. 5% of the world population. At last, antarctica and oceania with 9% and 6% of the world land have nearly zero percent of the world population, at 0% and 0. 5%, respectively.
The two pie charts illustrate the total proportion of the seven
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the largest continent in the
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, compared to the other
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take up the least
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and
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, over three-fifths of the
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living there, showing that it is the widest and over-populated continent in the
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. The second-largest continent is Africa with 20% of the
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in which 15% of the
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settling. The third-largest continent in the
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, it includes
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5. 5% of the
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with 9% and 6% of the
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have
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