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Given is a map of an unnamed town illustrating the probable sits of new shopping centres in the relation to various different zones as well as major transportation link. There are four main zones have given. Which is Central Business District, housing area and industrial area. Central Business District has located in the heart of the city. It is surrounded by residential area. Meanwhile, there is a rural area beyond the site. A bit far from the Central Business District area then across to the railways that positioned in the south west was lies an industrial area while the others in the north west. Furthermore, the access from Shopping Centre A to Shopping Centre B people can use public transportation. Therefore, the railway and the main road are linked to each location and throughout the buildings. People who want to go to the west or east town must be enter through the central town. Because it is the only access use main road.
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Given
is a map of an unnamed town illustrating the probable sits of new shopping
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centres
in the

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relation
to various
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different
zones
as well
as major transportation link.

There are four main zones have
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given
. Which is Central Business District, housing
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area
and
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industrial


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area
.

Central Business District has located in the heart of the city. It
is surrounded
by residential area.

Meanwhile, there is a rural
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area
beyond the site. A bit far from the Central Business District
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area
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then


across to the railways that positioned in the
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south west
was lies an industrial
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area
while the others in

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the
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north west
.

Furthermore
, the access from Shopping
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Centre
A to Shopping
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Centre
B
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people
can
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use
public

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transportation
.
Therefore
, the railway and the main road
are linked
to each location and throughout

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the
buildings.
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People
who want to go to the west or east town
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must
be
Consider using the past participle "entered"?
enter
through the
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central


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town
.
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Because
it is the
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only
access
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use
main road.
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IELTS academic Development Maps

Academic
  American English
12 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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