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The pie charts below show the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.

The pie charts below show the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. BDwp

The charts illustrate the number of consumer sold and rent various type of movies including VHS, DVD, and Blu-ray sales from the year2002 to 2011. Overall, it is noticeable that DVD has a highest number sales over the period of time. On the contrary, movies rental and VHS sales are continuously decreasing. Surprisingly, consumer do not interested in Blu-ray which has a smallest number of sales of all time. Focusing on rental and DVD sales, the particular store has a highest number of film rent in 2007 while the majority of consumer interested in DVD sales in 2002, about 200, 000 people and 180, 000 people, respectively. Furthermore, the number of consumer sold DVD is significantly fluctuated. It increase from the year 2002 to 2007 and continually decreasing. However, the rental rate is steadily decreasing over time. Turning to VHS and Blu-ray sales, the data shows the decreasing of VHS sales, but increasing those sold Blu-ray. The period of VHS sales ended in 2005; however, the store start to sold Blu-ray since 2007. Interestingly, the number of both VHS and Blu-ray sales are significantly different to the number of DVD sales.

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