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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

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The pie charts illustrate how the three countries solve the dangerous waste products problem. First of all it is seen the most popular decision of this problem is digging in two countries: the UK and Sweden, but in Korea the most popular way is recycling. The UK only has two other methods: chemical treatment and dumping at sea, but absolutely does not the recycling method. the recycling method. By the pie charts seen that, this method constitutes almost 70% of Korea’s dealting from the dangerous waste. In the Sweden it amounts the quarter of all. The excavating and incineration we have all of these countries but in other propositions, for instance: in Korea is only a little more than 30%, in Sweden is three-quarters of all and in the UK is nearly 90% and the remaining part of the UK is only its methods which namely: chemical treatment and dumping at sea.

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