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The Pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries

The Pie charts depict hazardous waste product handling methods, such as recycling, incineration, underground, chemical, and dumping at sea from three countries as comparison representative, namely The Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the United Kingdom. Overall, the waste product handling method has various ways in each country. The Republic of Korea has paid more attention to the recycling method, while Sweden and the United Kingdom have relied on mainly on landfills. Moreover, the United Kingdom tend to use chemical treatment and dumping at sea processes. In the Republic of Korea, they handle the wastes by recycling process (65%), which the highest proportion rather than Sweden (25%) and The United Kingdom. In the second position, landfills have become their option (22%), followed by incineration, not more than 10%. On the contrary, Sweden has higher incineration (20%) and buried underground thirty-three margin than Korea (55%). In the meantime, The United Kingdom exclusively believes in landfills (82%). They also use chemical treatment and dumping at sea (8%), various from Korea and Sweden. However United Kingdom does not take recycling to handle the waste compared with Republic Korea and Sweden, about 69% and 25% respectively.
The Pie charts depict hazardous
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product handling methods, such as
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recycling
, incineration, underground, chemical, and dumping at sea from three countries as comparison representative,
namely
The Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the
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United
Kingdom.

Overall
, the
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waste
product handling method has various ways in each country. The Republic of Korea has paid more attention to the
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recycling
method, while Sweden and the
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United
Kingdom have relied on
mainly
on landfills.
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, the
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United
Kingdom tend to
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use
chemical treatment and dumping at sea processes.

In the Republic of Korea, they handle the
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wastes
by
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recycling
process (65%), which the highest proportion
rather
than Sweden (25%) and The
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United
Kingdom. In the second position, landfills have become their option (22%), followed by incineration, not more than 10%.
On the contrary
, Sweden has higher incineration (20%) and buried underground thirty-three margin than Korea (55%).

In the meantime, The
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United
Kingdom exclusively believes in landfills (82%). They
also
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use
chemical treatment and dumping at sea (8%), various from Korea and Sweden.
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However
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United
Kingdom does not take
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recycling
to handle the
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waste
compared with Republic Korea and Sweden, about 69% and 25%
respectively
.
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