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The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries to India and China in 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries to India and China in 2005 and 2015. jGNM
The given pie charts elucidate changes in exports patterns from EU countries to India and China between 2005 and 2015. Overall, it is clear that Germany emerged as the major Exporter to both India and China. Meanwhile share of other countries as far as export is concerned, either declined or remained unchanged. To begin with, as far as India is considered, in 2005, the UK was the biggest exporter which exported 29% goods, followed closely by Belgium, 25%, and Germany, 15%. while exports to China in 2005 were overwhelmingly dominated by Germany, 38% followed by a distant France, 13%. Other countries, however, had less than 10% each to both the nations. Further analyzing the graph, from 2005 to 2015, situation changed drastically in case of exports to India, as the share significantly fell by more than half to 13%; that of Belgium also fell by 5%, and Germany surpassed both the UK and Belgium to 25%. Exports from other countries stayed stable. Exports to China, though, did not witness much change, except that the share of Germany rose further by 10% to 48%, while French export share fell by 3%.
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, either declined or remained unchanged.

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29%
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, followed
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by Belgium, 25%, and Germany, 15%.
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China


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2005 were
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India, as the share
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Germany surpassed both the UK and Belgium to 25%.
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by 10% to 48%, while French
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share fell by 3%.
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