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The map depicts an area of the Beach Hotel in 2003 and 2013 years, as well as, the urban development that took place.

The map depicts an area of the Beach Hotel in 2003 and 2013 years, as well as, the urban development that took place. VEaVJ

The map depicts an area of the Beach Hotel in 2003 and 2013 years, as well as, the urban development that took place. Overall, there were a number of notable changes to the buildings and amenities of this area. In 2003, there was a fence between the beach and recreational area, however, by 2013, it was demolished and the restaurant along with the seating area was switched with the swimming pool area. Furthermore, next to the restaurant was put up a new Water Sports Centre. As for the swimming pool, it was enlarged and on its left two palms were planted. Another major change in the area in 2013 was the expansion of the residential facility. The Hotel rooms doubled themselves during 13 years period. In addition, the beach area remained the same and had not experienced any changes. To sum it up, the area was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes in residential, commercial, and recreation facilities.

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 of the Beach Hotel in 2003 and 2013 years, as well
 as, the urban development that took place.

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changes
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area
. In 2003, there was a fence between the beach and recreational You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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, however
, by 2013, it was demolished
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was switched
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. Furthermore
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. As for the swimming pool, it was enlarged
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left
 two palms were planted
.

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change
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 in 2013 was the expansion of the residential facility. The Hotel rooms doubled themselves during 13 years period. In addition
, the beach You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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changes
.

To sum it up, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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was renovated
extensively
, seeing fundamental This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in residential, commercial, and recreation facilities. 