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The pie charts below illustrate aspects of trade between Vietnam and the United States in 1994.

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The pie charts illustrate the statistics in terms of exports and imports between Vietnam and the USA in 1994. Overall, Vietnam's imports from the United States were valued more than that of the USA's imports from Vietnam. While the percentage of aircraft parts was the highest in exports from the USA to Vietnam, the largest exported from Vietnam to the US was coffee. What stands out from the first chart, exports from Vietnam to the US, is that coffee was the biggest sector accounting for more than a fifth in 1994. The proportion of fruit and vegetable imported into the USA took up 16%, which was the next largest segment. On the contrary, the United States spent a minority of over 4% on rice and seafood. Similarly, the percentage of garments and others were the least demanded products, merely 2% of total 52$million. As far as the total Vietnam's imports from the US are concerned, it was valued at 172$ million, which was three times as high as that of the USA's imports from Vietnam. It is noticeable that aircraft parts constituted a significant proportion of over 70% in 1994. During the same year, the figure for machinery and other goods imported from the US made up fairly similar of more than a third, compared to a small 6% of cars’ proportion.
The pie charts illustrate the statistics in terms of exports and
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imports
between Vietnam and the USA in 1994.

Overall
, Vietnam's
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imports
from the United States
were valued
more than that of the USA's
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imports
from Vietnam. While the percentage of aircraft parts was the highest in exports from the USA to Vietnam, the largest exported from Vietnam to the US was coffee.

What stands out from the
first
chart, exports from Vietnam to the US, is that coffee was the biggest sector accounting for more than a fifth in 1994. The proportion of fruit and vegetable imported into the USA took up 16%, which was the
next
largest segment.
On the contrary
, the United States spent a minority of over 4% on rice and seafood.
Similarly
, the percentage of garments
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and others
were the least demanded products,
merely
2% of total
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$52".
52$
million.

As far as the total Vietnam's
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imports
from the US
are concerned
, it
was valued
at
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$172".
172$
million, which was three times as high as that of the USA's
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imports
from Vietnam. It is noticeable that aircraft parts constituted a significant proportion of over 70% in 1994. During the same year, the figure for machinery and other
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goods
imported from the US made up
fairly
similar of more than a third, compared to a
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small
6% of cars’ proportion.
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