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The chart below show the half frequency of people eat fast food in the restaurant between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below show the half frequency of people eat fast food in the restaurant between 2003 and 2013. ENYWD
Information about the eating junk food preference among the UK residents from 2003 to 2013 is predicted by the rendered bar graph. The data has been calibrated in the percentage. Overall, it can be observed that, the percentage of people who eaten fast food once a week and once or twice a month werw higher than other scheduling proportion. to begin with in 2003 the frequency of people who prefer junk food once a week and once or twice a month but top of list accounted for around 30%. Whereas, everyday eaten and avoid fast food citizen ratio was manifested under 5% in that year, which were remains stable less than 5% from 2006 to 2013. Moving ahead, in 2006 there was increasing the number of UK resident who junk food service on several timea week, once a week and a few time a year were increased by approximately 5% as against 2003. While, ratio of a once a week ate fast food people was decreased to a equator in 2006, that was rise up above one third in 2013.
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