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The graph below show a conference hall built in 1981 and planned for 2025

The graph below show a conference hall built in 1981 and planned for 2025 KGDm0

The pictorial representation demonstrates the outline structure of Dahl conference hall in 1985 and the proposed changes for the future. In 1985, in the northern side of wall, there was a room, hall, car park. Along, gardens was located in the East side. on the W side, there was another room. Reception was situated at the middle of the hall and the whole Southern half was another garden. Several changes planned for 2025. To begin with, in the North side, in the place of car park, a new block for 20 rooms will be constructed. Moreover, in Eastern side, gardens was demolished and converted into car parking. Six room will be added in the South side of hall. The six new include an IT course, canteen and kitchen, meeting rooms and lastly game room. Overall, the major transformation will be seen in the Southern part of the hall. The development of hall opened up for people such as IT course, canteen and kitchen, meeting rooms and games room.

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