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formation of honey by bees process diagram

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the given picture explains the way of formation of honey by the bees in few steps. firstly, the bees have to build a container which is known as hive. moreover, it also consist of individual build cells formed by group of bees. for next step all the bees might leave there habitat in order to search for fluroscent flowers also they themselves got attracted towards them. then using proboscis a long straw like tongue they suck nectar droplets from the plant. the nectar is then taken back to hive where the process of making honey begins. firstly, it is put into the cells. Then, followed by cooling down of nectar. in order to do this, the bees fan the nectar filled cells with their wings. As a result, the nectar filled cells with their wings. As a result, the nectar looses water content and then finally delicious honey is ready to consumed by humans. overall, the process begins with the honey bees building a hive, and then finishes when the honey is ready to be collected and used which fully completed in seven different steps.

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