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Decsribe a chart of total number of medals in Olimpic Games

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The chart provides information about the overall number of Olympic medals, which are golden, silver, and, bronze, for twelve various countries. Overall, we can see the USA overrating all countries and having the biggest number of medals. Compare to China which is at the lowest point of the chart with a total number of medals around 500. The difference in the numbers of medals for European countries is not significant. Almost all of them have more or less 500 medals in total. The Soviet Union is on the second place with a total number of 1000 medals which is almost twice less than the USA. Asian countries have the least number of medals, for both, Japan and China, they have less than 500 medals overall. To sum it up, we can clearly see the USA's leading position for all medals with the greatest number, and most of the counties have around 500 medals in total.
The chart provides information about the
overall
number
of Olympic
medals
, which are golden, silver, and, bronze, for twelve various countries.

Overall
, we can
see
the USA overrating all countries and having the biggest
number
of
medals
. Compare to China which is at the lowest point of the chart with a
total
number
of
medals
around 500.

The difference in the
numbers
of
medals
for European countries is not significant. Almost all of them have more or less 500
medals
in
total
. The Soviet Union is on the second place with a
total
number
of 1000
medals
which is almost twice less than the USA. Asian countries have the least
number
of
medals
, for both, Japan and China, they have less than 500
medals
overall
.

To sum it up, we can
clearly
see
the USA's leading position for all
medals
with the greatest
number
, and most of the counties have around 500
medals
in
total
.
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IELTS academic Decsribe a chart of total number of medals in Olimpic Games

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4 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
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