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The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the United Kingdom in two different years

The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the United Kingdom in two different years OgNmM

The pie chart shows the information about household rubbish in United Kingdom between 1985 to 2002. The data has been calibrated in percentages. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, kitchen orangic in household rubbish was highest in 2002. whereas the composition of textiles for household rubbish was lowest in 1985. To begin with, there was a little difference between the composition of textiles in both years, Which was 1%. Whereas the wasted of kitchen was double than that of miscellaneous in 2002, those was 27%. Eversince, kitchen and paper was 28%and 36% in 1985 was respectively. Further more, there was a major difference in plastic use in both years, that was 8%. Only wood was discreasd in 2002. Plastic remaining same from begin to culminating

The pie chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the information about household rubbish A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United Kingdom".in the United Kingdom
in United Kingdom
Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1985 and 2002".between 1985 and 2002
between 1985 to 2002
. The data has been calibrated
 in percentages. Overall
, it can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, kitchen Possible spelling mistake found.orangeorganicOrangetragicorangesfrantic
orangic
 in household rubbish was highest in 2002. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhereas
whereas
 the composition of textiles for household rubbish was lowest in 1985. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 difference between the composition of textiles in both years, Which was 1%. Whereas the wasted of kitchen was Use "doubler" to make a comparison with this adjective.doubler
double
 than that of miscellaneous in 2002, those was 27%. Possible spelling mistake found.Ever since
Eversince
, kitchen and paper was 28%and 36% in 1985 was respectively
. Further
 more, there was a major difference in plastic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 in both years, that was 8%. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
Only
 wood was Possible spelling mistake found.increaseincreaseddiseasedecreasedecreaseddiscrete
discreasd
 in 2002. Plastic remaining same from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 to Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphculminating.culminating!culminating?culminating:culminating,culminating;
culminating