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The diagram below shows the lifecycle of common frog

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The given diagram illustrates the information about usual frog of the lifecycle. Overall, the general lifecycle of frog process consists of several stages. It begins with eggs surrounded by jelly as well as ends up with adult frog about 3 years. Firstly, eggs surrounded by jelly then grow up and into embryos. Initially, embryos put onto the tadpoles clinging to water plant about 10 days. In the next step, external gills for breathing and grow up. Then, tail keeps on growing lungs develop about 3 weeks. Afterwards, the frog cycle into back legs appear about 8 weeks. Subsequently, the process going through lives from food stored in the tail. After that, the lifecycle through in to front legs appear 10/11 weeks. Thereafter, the cycle carry through tail becomes shorter. Next, the process of frog cycle go ahead to frog let 12/14 weeks. Finally, the frog into a adult frog about 3 year.
The
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diagram illustrates the information about usual
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of the lifecycle.

Overall
, the general lifecycle of
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frog
process consists of several stages. It
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begins
with eggs surrounded by jelly
as well
as ends up with adult
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frog
about 3 years.

Firstly
, eggs surrounded by jelly then grow up and into embryos.
Initially
, embryos put onto the tadpoles clinging to water plant about 10 days. In the
next
step, external gills for breathing and grow up. Then, tail
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keeps
on growing lungs develop about 3 weeks. Afterwards, the
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frog
cycle into back legs appear about 8 weeks.

Subsequently
, the process going through
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lives
from food stored in the tail. After that, the lifecycle through in to front legs appear 10/11 weeks. Thereafter, the cycle carry through tail becomes shorter.
Next
, the process of
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frog
cycle go ahead to
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frog
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let
12/14 weeks.
Finally
, the
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frog
into
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a
adult
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about 3 year.
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