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The table below shows birth rate and death rate in SAARC countries in 2013

The table below shows birth rate and death rate in SAARC countries in 2013 7rVMA
The given table charts illustrate the birth and death rates in SAARC countries in the year of 2013. Overall, the Afghanistan had higher number of birth and death rates than that of other countries in the given period. The highest number of birth and death defeat was Afghanistan whereas the least birth rate was Sri Lanka and the lowest death rate was Maldives. In terms of Afghanistan, they had 39 birth and 14 death rate. The people of Pakistan, their was 27 birth rate more than death rate was 7. There were 22 birth and 7 death rates in India. While the number of birth and death rates was (21 and 6) in Nepal. On the other hand, the remaining countries had difference number of birth and death rates in the given period. 22 birth and 3 death rates were by Maldives at that period. The Bangladesh had number of birth and death rates was (20 and 6 respectively). In case of Bhutan, the number of birth and death rates was ( 18 and 6 ) approximately. The birth and death rates was (11 and 6) in Sri Lanka the period given.
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was Maldives.

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