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The chart shows consumtion of various fastfood such as hamburger pizza and fish and chips.

The chart shows consumtion of various fastfood such as hamburger pizza and fish and chips. Prp1J
The given chart below shows average pence spent on the eating hamburgers, fish and chips and pizza by Britishers and income which was generated through the same and the graph illustrates popularity of the fast food in terms of grammes and in the given time span of 1970 to 1990. Overall, it can be summarized from the chart that towering income was generated through hamburgers followed by fish and chips and pizza while, hamburgers were also the most famous fast food in the given time period. It is evident from the chart that income is divided into three parts on the basis of its consumption which is High income, Average income and Low income. Furthermore, in the high income the most sellable fast food was hamburger and its cost was 40 pence per person per week while, a dip of doubled was seen in the case of fish and chips and around 20 pence per person was spent on pizza. In addition, almost same story was told in average income but by selling of fish and chips were done of above 25 pence per person while, pizza was the least sold fast food with below 10 pence per person in the lower income. Hamburgers was the most famous fast food throughout the given time span as it in 1970 its consumption was around 100 grammes till 1975 but after it escalated to 500 grammes at the end of 1990 while, pizza followed same trend but in fish and chips it was vice versa as it started from around 300 grammes in 1970 but it constantly declined till 1990 which ended up to around 250 grammes. Hence, it can be said that hamburger was the most common selling food and it was also most preferable food by Britishers.
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chart below
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shows
average pence spent on the eating hamburgers, fish and chips and pizza by Britishers and
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income
which
was generated
through the same and the graph illustrates popularity of the
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fast
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food
in terms of
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grammes
and in the
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given
time span of 1970 to 1990.

Overall
, it can
be summarized
from the chart that towering
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income
was generated
through hamburgers followed by fish and chips and pizza while, hamburgers were
also
the most
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famous
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fast
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food
in the
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given
time period.

It is evident from the chart that
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income
is divided
into three parts on the basis of its

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consumption
which is High
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income
, Average
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income
and Low
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income
.
Furthermore
, in the high
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income
the most sellable
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fast
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food
was hamburger and its cost was 40 pence per
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person
per week while, a dip of doubled was
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seen
in the case of fish and chips and
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around
20 pence per
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person
was spent
on pizza.
In addition
, almost same story was
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told
in average
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income
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but
by selling of fish and chips
were done
of above 25 pence per
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person
while, pizza was the least sold
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fast
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food
with below 10 pence per
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person
in the lower
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income
. Hamburgers was the most
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famous
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fast
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food
throughout the
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given
time span as it in 1970 its consumption was
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around
100
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grammes
till 1975
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but
after it escalated to 500
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grammes
at the
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end
of 1990 while, pizza followed same trend
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but


in fish and chips it was vice versa as it
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started
from
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around
300
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grammes
in 1970
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but
it

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constantly
declined till 1990 which ended up to
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around
250
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grammes
.
Hence
, it can
be said
that hamburger was the most common selling
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food
and it was
also
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most
preferable
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food
by Britishers.
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