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The pie chart so the total percentage of immigration and emigration population of the UK in 2007

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The given pie chart shows the total percentage of immigration and emigration population of the UK in 2007. According to chat that, their were highest percentage of peoples went and came for the job which were approx 30 percentage in each. Moreover, for looking works 12 percentage humans immigrate and 22 percentage were emigrate at the UK. Likewise, the accompany or joining was quite similar, 15 percentage immigration and 13 percentage of immigration. As per the chat that, the people who were looking for formal study outside the UK was higher than who were entering in UK. Which was, 26 percentage and four percentage respectively. However, 32 percentage of people were enter and 17 percentage of people were leave the UK for other in on specified reason. Overall, it could be clear a that, highest percentage of people migrated for purpose of job definite.
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the total
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of immigration and emigration population of the UK in 2007.

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peoples
went and came for the job which were approx 30
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percentage
in each.
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, for looking works 12
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humans immigrate and 22
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percentage
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were
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emigrate
at the UK.
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or joining was quite similar, 15
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percentage
immigration and 13
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percentage
of immigration.

As per the chat that, the
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people
who were looking for formal study outside the UK was higher than who were entering in UK. Which was, 26
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percentage
and four
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percentage
respectively
.
However
, 32
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percentage
of
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people
were enter and 17
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of
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people
were
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leave
the UK for other in on specified reason.

Overall
, it could be
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clear
a that,
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highest
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of
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people
migrated for purpose of job
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IELTS academic The pie chart so the total percentage of immigration and emigration population of the UK in 2007

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4 paragraphs
144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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