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The pie chart shows world population in 1900 and 2000

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The diagram gives information on world population in 1900 and 2000. Overall, both of these years Asia constitute the highest population as well as it does not matter whether Soviet Asia includes or not. In 1900, the average population was 1, 6 billion. Asia consisted of 60% of the world population. The second most population used to belong to Europe with including Russia. It was ¼ of the overall population. The least inhabitants were Latin Americans and Others. In 2000, the overall population was 6 billion while it was 3. 75× more than last 100 years. Same as last one Asia and Europe including Russia constitute the highest population of the world in 2000. These are 54% and 14% respectively. The population of North America and others were the same as 100 years before. The Middle East and North African's population increased by 3%.
The diagram gives information on world
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in 1900 and 2000.

Overall
, both of these years Asia
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constitute
the highest
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population
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as well as
it does not matter whether Soviet Asia includes or not.

In 1900, the average
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was 1, 6 billion. Asia consisted of 60% of the world
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population
. The second most
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population
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used
to belong to Europe with including Russia. It was ¼ of the
overall
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population
. The least inhabitants were Latin Americans
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and Others
.

In 2000, the
overall
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was 6 billion while it was 3. 75× more than last 100 years. Same as last one Asia and Europe including Russia constitute the highest
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population
of the world in 2000. These are 54% and 14%
respectively
. The
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population
of North America
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and others
were the same as 100 years
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before
. The Middle East and North African's
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increased by 3%.
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows world population in 1900 and 2000

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