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The rendered pie chart depicts the information about different kinds of movies arepopular in the teen age group. And data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, it can be clearly seen that majority of teen age group interested in comedy where as minimum teens show their interests in two groups that's in forigen and science fiction. To commence with, comedy movies gained more popularity among the teenagers that is around 27percent. It is followed by actions film which is preferred by 18% teenagers. Drama and romance film are equally attract teenagers. Both of them attract a less Than fifth each. Moreover, only 11percent shows their interests in horror. The lowest %of teenagers depicts in the science fiction and foreign movie that 8 percentage each.
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