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The pie chart shows theAmount of money spendMunde UK SchoolDuring 1981 1991 and 2001

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The given pie charts gives information about expenses of specific school of the United Kingdom for two decades. The data has been given in proportion in charts. Overall, the majority of money was spent in salary of faculties. Whareas, insurance allocated small amount of proportion. To commence with, in 1981, over the third amount of money were expended on salary of teaching staff. This figure had reached half, by 1991. Moreover, in 2001, 45% of total budget was allocated to teachers salaries. However, small fraction of total spending were used for insurance of things, in1981. This proportion had increased over the decade and reached 8% by 2001. Apart from this, in 1981, 28% of total budget was spent on other workers. This future were increased over the decade and reached 15% after 20 years. Spending on stationaries were fluctuated within the time. The same scenario was followed by furniture and equipment with 15% and 23% in 1981 and 2001 respectively.
The
given
pie charts gives information about expenses of specific school of the United Kingdom for two decades. The data has been
given
in proportion in charts.

Overall
, the majority of money
was spent
in salary of faculties.
Whareas
, insurance allocated
small
amount of proportion.

To commence with, in 1981, over the third amount of money
were expended
on salary of teaching staff. This figure had reached half, by 1991.
Moreover
, in 2001, 45% of total budget
was allocated
to teachers salaries.
However
,
small
fraction of total spending were
used
for insurance of things, in1981. This proportion had increased over the decade and reached 8% by 2001.

Apart from this, in 1981, 28% of total budget
was spent
on other workers. This future
were increased
over the decade and reached 15% after 20 years. Spending on
stationaries
were fluctuated
within the time. The same scenario
was followed
by furniture and equipment with 15% and 23% in 1981 and 2001
respectively
.
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