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bar chart analysis people aged 25-34 are hosed in the UK.

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The bar chart illustrates the form of housing for people aged 25-34 in the UK. The horizontal axis manifests 10 years from 2004 to 2014 and the vertical axis is the percentage of two types of housing in the considered country. Generally, for 10 consecutive years the average percentage of owning home had dropped gradually. In contrary, for renters, it had increased slightly. In 2004, about 20 percent of people are accounted for renters however the percentage of the home owners exceeded more than 55 percent but in 2014 the percentage of renters reached the peak conversely, the rate of home owners hit bottom. Likewise, in 2011 and 2012, it can show stable rate for both groups also in that years it reveals a moderate difference between renters and the other group. Finally, if we assume an imaginary line from the longest to the shortest bar, we can conclude that people aged 25-34 are more renters than being home owners.
The bar chart illustrates the form of housing for
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people
aged 25-34 in the UK. The horizontal axis manifests 10 years from 2004 to 2014 and the vertical axis is the
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percentage
of two types of housing in the considered country.

Generally
, for 10 consecutive years the average
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percentage
of owning home had dropped
gradually
. In contrary, for
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renters
, it had increased
slightly
. In 2004, about 20 percent of
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people
are accounted
for
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renters
however
the
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percentage
of the
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home owners
exceeded more than 55 percent
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but
in 2014 the
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percentage
of
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renters
reached the peak
conversely
, the rate of
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home owners
hit bottom.
Likewise
, in 2011 and 2012, it can
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show
stable rate for both groups
also
in that years it reveals a moderate difference between
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renters
and the other group.

Finally
, if we assume an imaginary line from the longest to the shortest bar, we can conclude that
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people
aged 25-34 are more
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renters
than being
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home owners
.
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IELTS academic bar chart analysis people aged 25-34 are hosed in the UK.

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