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The pie chart shows the spending habits of people in UK in 1971 and 2001 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant and making comparisons where

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The given Pie Charts compare the expenses incurred by the residents of the UK in 1971 and 2001. Overall, it was observed that spenging on cars, computers and dining at restaurents increased drastically, where as an negative growth was recorded for other commodities. Taking a closer view, people of the UK spent maximum proportion of their money on food and cars. In 1971 food accounted 44% of total expense which decreased to 14% in 2001. Whereas, spending on cars became approximately twofold in 2001 to 43%. Money disbursed on computers increased by 10% in 2001 from 2 % in 1971. Analysing further, in 1971, expense incurred on petrol and furniture were 10% and 9% and q downfall of 2% and 1% respectively was observed in 2001 in spending habits of dwellers of Britain. Expenditure on dining at restaurants doubled from 7 % to 14%. Whereas, money disbursed for books recorded the negative growth and decreased to 1% in 2001 from 6 % in 1971.

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