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the pie chart shows the percentages of expenditure on different items in USA

the pie chart shows the percentages of expenditure on different items in USA gAX81

The pie charts compare the proportions of spending on different items in the USA from 1966 to 1996. Overall, It is clear that American citizens spent mostly on food while the least expenditure went to computers over the period In terms of minor changes, There was hardly any change in expenditure on food over between 1996 and 1996 with the proportion increased by 1% from 44%. Additionally, The proportions of restaurant and petrol spendings were 7% and 9% respectively. While a rise by 3% was witnessed in the figure for restaurants, that of petrol slightly declined to 8%. Regarding remarkable changes, expenditure on cars saw the biggest changes with a nearly three-fold decrease from the initial figure of 23%. In contrast, the figure for books doubled from 6% to14%.

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 items in the USA from 1966 to 1996.

Overall
, It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that American citizens spent mostly
 on food while the least expenditure went to computers over the period

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changes
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change
 in expenditure on food over between 1996 and 1996 with the proportion increased by 1% from 44%. Additionally
, The proportions of restaurant and petrol Possible spelling mistake found.spending
spendings
 were 7% and 9% respectively
. While a rise by 3% was witnessed
 in the figure for restaurants, that of petrol slightly
 declined to 8%.

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changes
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 the biggest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
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 with a nearly
 three-fold decrease from the initial figure of 23%. In contrast
, the figure for books doubled from 6% to14%. 