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The picture describes the change of a school

The picture describes the change of a school 96AYW

The maps demonstrate how the layout of a school has changed over 35 years period from 1985 to now. Overall, the campus was designed to diversify functions to provide more and more facilities for teachers and students. During the given period, the number of students has increased significantly from 1500 to 2300. In term of the teaching building area, the old two storey teaching building has been knocked down and replaced by a new classroom block with three storey. Moreover, some classroom located nearby were constructed to response to the growing student scale. The library has redesigned into a resource center equipped with computers. In the south of the campus, the original empty space has been cut down to make room for a new fitness center and a swimming pool. Meanwhile, car park has been remained in the north of the campus for 35 years.

The maps demonstrate how the layout of a school has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 over 35 years period from 1985 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Overall
, the campus was designed
 to diversify functions to provide more and more facilities for teachers and students.

During the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period, the number of students has increased significantly
 from 1500 to 2300.

In term of the teaching building area, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "two-storey"two-storey
two storey
 teaching building has been knocked
 down and replaced by a new classroom block with three Possible agreement error. The noun 'storey' seems to be countable, so consider using: "storeys".storeys
storey
. Moreover
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 classroom located nearby were constructed
 to response to the growing student scale. The library has redesigned into a resource center equipped with computers.

In the south of the campus, the original empty space has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 room for a new fitness center and a swimming pool. Meanwhile, car park has been remained
 in the north of the campus for 35 years. 