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The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport in 1991.

The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport in 1991. Y286j
Overall, it is clear from the chart, the highest percentage of money was spent on roads. Railways and public transport also made up a significant proportion, whereas a relatively small amount of funds were from other transport form. The highest amount of money was spent on roads. In fact, just over a half of funds expenditure was on roads. The second largest amount of money was spent on railways. They represented just over a third of the funds. Public transport which made up a tenth of the European expenditure in that year, were the third largest of group. The percentage of money from other forms transport were much smaller. Money spent for intermodal, inland water and ports for
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over a half of funds expenditure was on roads. The second largest amount of
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on railways. They represented
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over a third of the funds. Public
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which made up a tenth of the European expenditure in that year, were the third largest of group.

The percentage of
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from other forms
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IELTS academic The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport in 1991.

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