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The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010.

The two charts reveal that Retail marketing such as Groceries, Home and Kitchen as well as Online sales like Appliances and Clothing in Canada over a period of 5 years from 2005 to 2010. In 2005, apparels is given high priority with 38% apart from other items. Inspite, it got declined about 16% over the next 5 years. Here after, sales on groceries are at bottom line just with 14 percent in 2005, but stood almost equal with clothing with 22% by 2010. As seen from the chart, Households made more than one-fourth of selling on 2005, but there is a dramatic decrease in its sale by 2010 with 11 percentage. The amount of vending on electric appliances grows rapidly within the period from 2005 till 2010. We obtain a growth almost 45% to that of 2005, it stood on top level of trading at the end. Overall, E-commerce made all its sales higher from 2005-2010. Initially, Fashion stood top in 2005 but by 2010 Electronic appliances remained the biggest spenders on online marketing.

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