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The chart below gives information on the percentage of a family budget typically spent on five different household expenses in the US, Australia and the UK.

The provided bar chart compares the families' outlay on five various household expenses in the US, Australia and the UK. Overall, what stands out from the chart is that all of three countries' citizens dedicated the biggest proportion of their budgets to housing. Another interesting point is that people in the UK spent as much money on food as Australians on transport. The percentage of allocated money on housing constituted just over 25% in the US, while the figure for United Kingdom made up roughly 23%. Interestingly, Australians devoted nearly the same percentage of their budgets to housing and transport (20%). Meanwhile, twice as much money was expended in entertainment as in food by population of the UK (10% and 20% respectively). By contrast, a modest 15% of Australians' outlay went to entertainment, which differed by approximately 3% from Americans' expenditure (12%). When it comes to medical spendings in the US, it stood at about 7%, whereas the trend for Australia and the UK reached only 4% and 2%.
The provided bar chart compares the families' outlay on five various household expenses in the US, Australia and the UK.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that all of three countries' citizens dedicated the biggest proportion of their budgets to housing. Another interesting point is that
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in the UK spent as much money on food as Australians on transport. The percentage of allocated money on housing constituted
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over 25% in the US, while the figure
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for United Kingdom
made up roughly 23%.
Interestingly
, Australians devoted
nearly
the same percentage of their budgets to housing and transport (20%). Meanwhile, twice as much money
was expended
in entertainment as in food by population of the UK (10% and 20%
respectively
). By contrast, a modest 15% of Australians' outlay went to entertainment, which differed by approximately 3% from Americans' expenditure (12%). When it
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to medical
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spendings
in the US, it stood at about 7%, whereas the trend for Australia and the UK reached
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4% and 2%.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information on the percentage of a family budget typically spent on five different household expenses in the US, Australia and the UK.

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