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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given data about the proportion of the people who live in urban areas in various regions around the world over 100 years from 1950 to 2050. Overall, it is clear seen that Latin America / Caribbean and North America will have the biggest population in urban regions by 2050. In 1950, Africa and Asia had less population than any other countries with 15 and 17 respectively, while North America and Oceania had the highest number of citizens in rural areas. In 2007, North America and Oceania had the same level of people are living in urban areas, whereas number of urban areas' people had a significant growth to 37 and 41 respectively. In addition, Europe and Oceania had the same number of individuals are living in rural regions with 71 and 72. In 2050, the members of society are living in urban areas will increase considerably everywhere. For instance, Europe, Latin America, and North America will have the biggest number by 2050 with 84, 89, and 90. In contrast, Africa will have the least amount of people living in urban place.
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who
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areas in various regions around the world over 100 years from 1950 to 2050.

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, it is
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clear
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that Latin America / Caribbean and
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North
America will have the biggest population in
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urban
regions by 2050.

In 1950, Africa and Asia had less population than any other countries with 15 and 17
respectively
, while
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North
America and Oceania had the highest
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number
of citizens in rural areas.

In 2007,
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North
America and Oceania had the same level of
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people
are
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living
in
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urban
areas, whereas
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of
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urban
areas'
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people
had a significant growth to 37 and 41
respectively
.
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In
addition, Europe and Oceania had the same
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number
of individuals are
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living
in rural regions with 71 and 72.

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In
2050, the members of society are
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living
in
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urban
areas will increase
considerably
everywhere.
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, Europe, Latin America, and
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North
America will have the biggest
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number
by 2050 with 84, 89, and 90.
In contrast
, Africa will have the least amount of
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people
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living
in
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urban
place.

IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.

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