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The pie chart shows the number of sales of two different random stores in India for the quarter of the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the number of sales of two different random stores in India for the quarter of the year 2012. GKJQ
The two pie charts illustrate the performance of the store A and store B sales for the quarter of the year 2012. Overall, it is clear that stationary was the highest sold item in store A within the period and in store B stationary and beauty products were the most significant sold items. Firstly, in store A more number of sales was done by stationary occupies nearly one fourth of the pie, followed by soft drinks, bread and vegetables approximately two thirds of the income was earned by these three items. Beauty product was the least sold item in store A over the quarter period. While, in store B soft drink and beauty product items were the most significant sold items, they occupied nearly two fourth of the pie chart. Soft drink was the third most sold item in store B. Butter, medicines and curd were the lowest income earning sales for store B with the quarter period for the year 2012.
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B sales for the quarter of the year 2012.

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that stationary was the highest sold
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A within the period and in
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B stationary and beauty products were the most significant sold items.

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A more number of sales
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. Beauty product was the least sold
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A over the quarter period.

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B soft drink and beauty product
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, they occupied
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B. Butter, medicines and curd were the lowest income earning sales for
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B with the quarter period for the year 2012.

IELTS academic The pie chart shows the number of sales of two different random stores in India for the quarter of the year 2012.

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