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should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.

should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries. dylE
The chart shows the challenges people face when they settle in a new country and how the challenges vary according to people’s ages. The most challenging aspect for young people aged 18 to 34 is making new friends, a problem experienced by 46% of the people in this age group. However, only 36% of 35 - 54 year olds find it hard to make friends, while even fewer people over 55 (23%) have this problem. 54% of the older age group finds learning the local language the biggest obstacle when settling. In comparison, the youngest age group finds this easier, and the percentage of people who have problems learning the language is much lower, at only 29%. In contrast to their language-learning difficulties, only 22% of people in the oldest age group have trouble finding accommodation. However, this is the second most significant problem for the other two age groups with 39% to 40% of the people in each group finding it hard. In general, all age groups experience the same problems to some extent, but people over the age of 55 reported that they face markedly fewer challenges settling in a new country than their younger respondents.
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aged 18 to 34 is making new friends, a
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experienced by 46% of the
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age
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friends, while even fewer
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over 55 (23%) have this
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problem. 54%
of the older
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age
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finds learning the local language the biggest obstacle when settling.
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finds this easier, and the percentage of
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learning the language is much lower, at
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22% of
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in the oldest
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have trouble finding accommodation.
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finding it
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of 55 reported that they face
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IELTS academic should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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