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The graph shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period. PNRg
The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent by three continents on different types of entertainment from 1995 to 2000. To begin, it is evident from the graph that the United State spent more in the year 2000. In comparison with other countries, it is noticed that the amount spent on the forms of entertainment was highest in the US throughout the year. Whereas, Cinema was considered the least popular among all forms. Moreover, television ranked first, followed by publishing. In these five years, the United State stood first after spending 257 in 2000 and 184 in 1995. Followed by Europe, it spent 131 in 2000, while 97 was accounted in 1995. Asia was the least popular continent in terms of spending money, however, a slight difference was seen in 2000, as compared with Europe. The former spent a total of 97 and the latter was responsible for only 67. Furthermore, Asia spent only 67, which was the least share. Moreover, Cinema had the smallest figures.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of money
spent
by three continents on
different
types of entertainment from 1995 to 2000.

To
begin
, it is evident from the graph that the United State
spent
more in the year 2000.
In comparison
with other countries, it
is noticed
that the amount
spent
on the forms of entertainment was highest in the US throughout the year.
Whereas
, Cinema
was considered
the least popular among all forms.
Moreover
, television ranked
first
, followed by publishing.

In these five years, the United State stood
first
after spending 257 in 2000 and 184 in 1995. Followed by Europe, it
spent
131 in 2000, while 97
was accounted
in 1995.

Asia was the least popular continent in terms of spending money,
however
, a slight difference was
seen
in 2000, as compared with Europe. The former
spent
a total of 97 and the latter was responsible for
only
67.
Furthermore
, Asia
spent
only
67, which was the least share.
Moreover
, Cinema had the smallest figures.
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IELTS academic The graph shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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