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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. B9wm

This double line graph shows the registrations of abroad and local students in Australian universities over a ten-year period. It is clear from the graph that the local students in Australian universities more than the overseas students. According to what is shown, overseas students in 2001 was 20000 total students and the commencing was nearly 10000. Then the total of overseas students increased to become 80000 and the commencing become 40000. While the local students was 400000 students in 2001 then it increased mildly to become 600000 students in 2006 and remained constant till 2010 while the commencing was waving. To sum up, we could say that the total of overseas students from year 2001 till 2010 was increasing gradually while in the total of the local students it was increasing from year 2001 till 2006 then it remained unchanged, in addition to the commencing of the overseas was going up slightly from 2001 to 2009 then it became constant in 2009 and 2010 while it was vacillated for the local students.

This double line graph This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the registrations of abroad and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in Australian universities over a ten-year period. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the graph that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in Australian universities more than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
overseas
 students.

According to what is shown
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
overseas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in 2001 was 20000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentireoutrightfulloverallunlimitedsheer
total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiatebegininauguratetake uplaunch
commencing
 was nearly
 10000. Then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentireoutrightfulloverallunlimitedsheer
total
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
overseas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 increased to become 80000 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiatebegininauguratetake uplaunch
commencing
 become 40000. While the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 was 400000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in 2001 then it increased mildly
 to become 600000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in 2006 and remained constant till 2010 while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiatebegininauguratetake uplaunch
commencing
 was waving.

To sum up, we could say that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentireoutrightfulloverallunlimitedsheer
total
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
overseas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 from year 2001 till 2010 was increasing gradually
 while in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentireoutrightfulloverallunlimitedsheer
total
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 it was increasing from year 2001 till 2006 then it remained unchanged, in addition
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiatebegininauguratetake uplaunch
commencing
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
overseas
 was going up slightly
 from 2001 to 2009 then it became constant in 2009 and 2010 while it was vacillated
 for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
. 