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The pie chart shows the information of using bicycle and car in uk

The pie chart shows the information of using bicycle and car in uk 6dmgl
The first pie chart shows why some people in UK prefer to cycle to work. Conversly, the second chart gives reason for those who choose to go to work by car. In detail, the highest percentage of those who favour cycling say that this is because riding a bicycle to work is healthier than driving 30% of them gave this is a reason. The sane amount of people 30% they cycle to work because it causes less pollution. 13%of people cycle to work because it us cheaper. Surprisingly, a similar amount of people said that they cycled to work because it is faster than driving the cars. The 15% of peopel who ride becycle claimed that no parking problem. In contrast to this, the percentage who prefer to travel by car because it is more comfortable is 40%. The two least important reasons for going to work by car, with 14% and 11% respetivelyis that people need to carry the things to work and that is safer than becycling. . . 22% people claim that it is really better for distance to go on work. Overall, it seems that the majority of people who cycle to work do this for health and less pollution. By contrast, those who travel by car want to have a more comfortable journey over longet distance.
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