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The pie-chart shows the exports from EU different countries to India and China in 2000 and 2010

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The given pie-charts give information about imports by India and China from different EU countries in 2000 and 2010 To sum-up, Germany was biggest exporter for India and China in 2010 and for China in 2000 whereas, India imported most of goods from UK in 2000. Austria was exporting least goods to both the nations in both cases Firstly, UK was selling 29% of goods to India which was about 4% more than Belgium in 2000. China got large amount of goods from Germany, that was 30% in same year. EU countries such as Sweden, Spain, Netherland, Finland and France exported almost same quantity of products to both the nations at 2%, 2%, 4%, 8% and 2%, orderly in 2000. 5% of goods were bought from other nations in India in 2000 amd figures were 4% for China. Moving to 2011, The largest proportion of goods was exported by Germany at 25% in India where statistics for China were 40%. India was importing almost half of goods from UK as compared to 2012. The ratio of importing was almost same with the importing of year 2000 in India from Sweden Spain Netherland France. Morey the flow was almost same for China in 2011. Austria and Finland exported very less quantity of goods to India and China.
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EU countries in 2000 and 2010

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exporter for India and China in 2010 and for China in 2000 whereas, India imported most of
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from UK in 2000. Austria was exporting
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to both the nations in both cases

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to India which was about 4% more than Belgium in 2000. China
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large amount of
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from Germany, that was 30% in same year. EU countries such as Sweden, Spain,
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, Finland and France exported
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same quantity of products to both the nations at 2%, 2%, 4%, 8% and 2%, orderly in 2000. 5% of
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were
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from other nations in India in 2000
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figures were 4% for China.

Moving to 2011, The largest proportion of
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was exported
by Germany at 25% in India where statistics for China were 40%. India was importing
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half of
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from UK as compared to 2012. The ratio of importing was
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same with the importing of year 2000 in India from Sweden Spain
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France.
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the flow was
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same for China in 2011. Austria and Finland exported
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less quantity of
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to India and China.
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