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The chart shows the growth rate in wages of some country between 1993 and 2003.

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The graph shows the information regarding growth rate in wages of some country between 1993 and2003. First of all, nearly 2 percent wages were incre between 1993 and 1994. After some time wages rose with Just one percent. Similarly, growth in wages remained relatively unchanged between 1995 and 1996. In 1998 rate of wages rose with six percent but after one year it fell down at the rate of 3 percent. between 2001 and 2002, rate of wages slightly reduced one percent only. In 2003, rate increased. Overall, it can be seen that the rate of wages dramatically rose between 1998 and 1999. After some time wage rate fell down.
The graph
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the information regarding growth
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rate
in wages of
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some
country between 1993 and2003.
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2
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percent
wages were
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incre
between 1993 and 1994.
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time wages rose with
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Just
one
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percent
.
Similarly
, growth in wages remained
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unchanged between 1995 and 1996. In 1998
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rate
of wages rose with six
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percent
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but
after one year it fell down at the
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rate
of 3
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percent
.
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between
2001 and 2002,
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rate
of wages
slightly
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reduced
one
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percent
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only
. In 2003,
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rate
increased.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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rate
of wages
dramatically
rose between 1998 and 1999.
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some
time wage
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rate
fell down.

IELTS academic The chart shows the growth rate in wages of some country between 1993 and 2003.

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