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The two pie graphs illustrate the result of a survey about the cultural and leisure activities of that boys and girls where participate in percentage wise. Overall, the boys participate more in computer games and least in reading whereas girls highly interested in dancing and least in listening to music. Boys use their cultural and leisure period activities often in computer games about 34%. But 2% for reading which is lowest in all. Likewise, basketball goes with 26% which is nearly higher moreover 17% for soccer and 11% of their activities involved in skateboarding. Remaining time on listening to music about 10%. Girls utilize their cultural and leisure activities more frequently in dancing with 27% on the contrary 10% in listening to music and reading is slightly lesser than dancing with 21%. Gymnastics is merely near to the lowest with 11%. Computer games are considered to be played with 18% and netball goes with 15%.

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