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The pie chart shows the amount spent by a school in the UK from 1981_2001

The pie chart shows the amount spent by a school in the UK from 1981_2001 alkeV

The pie chart illustrates the expenditure made on insurance, teachers' salary, furniture and equipment, resources, and other workers salary for a period of 20 years. Overall, it is seen that the highest amount was spent on teachers salary and other workers salary while the least was on insurance. In 1981, the biggest allocation was made to the school 40%, it rose gradually to half of the budget in 1991, as compared to 2001 that experienced a decrease to 45%. In contrast, other workers wages took off at 28% in 1981, a difference of 8% was seen in 1991. Whereas, less than a fifth of the proportion was spent in 2001. Furniture and equipment was bought with 1/5th of the total allocation, same amount was used in buying books in 1981. Whereas, 1991 and 2001 had 5% and 23% respectively. However, 2% of the 1981 budget was used for insurance, a slight increase of 1% seen in 1991. Finally, more than double of the value in 1991 experienced in 2001.

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salary
 while the least was on insurance.

In 1981, the biggest allocation was made
 to the school 40%, it rose gradually
 to half of the budget in 1991, as compared to 2001 that experienced a decrease to 45%. In contrast
, other workers wages took off at 28% in 1981, a difference of 8% was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in 1991. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, less than a fifth of the proportion was spent
 in 2001. Furniture and equipment was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 with 1/5th of the total allocation, same amount was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in buying books in 1981. Whereas, 1991 and 2001 had 5% and 23% respectively
. However
, 2% of the 1981 budget was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for insurance, a slight increase of 1% This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in 1991. Finally
, more than double of the value in 1991 experienced in 2001. 