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The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's located in the USA spent and received in one year summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent

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The above pie chart is showing the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. we can observe from the above two charts that is one showing Revenue sources and the second is Expenditures chart, In the revenue sources chart major part of the revenue is Donated Food with 86. 6% and least with government Grants and Investment income with 0. 2%. By looking at the Expenditures chart huge amount is spending on Program Services with 95. 8% and Least Management and General with 1. 6%. If closely look at the details of the charts received revenue is $53, 561, 580 and spent is $53, 224, 896 which less than the received revenue. So, can conclude there is no loss by spending 95. 8% on program services
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Grants and Investment income with 0. 2%. By looking at the Expenditures
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huge amount is spending on Program Services with 95. 8% and Least Management and General with 1. 6%.

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is $53, 561, 580 and spent is $53, 224, 896 which less than the received revenue.

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, can conclude there is no loss by spending 95. 8% on program services
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's located in the USA spent and received in one year

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