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The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

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The diagram depicts the seven steps of production of honey. Overall, it shows the initial stage in which honey bee build a hive and finish it with honey to be ready for collection and use. Looking at the details, intially honey bees begin to build a container that is called hive. After that, honey bees leaves the hives in scearch of flowers. When they find a flower and collect the nectar from it which is used to make honey. Moreover, after collecting nectar, honey bees return to the hive and put it in the cells and the process of honey making begins. Honey bees used their wings to cool down the nectar. Consequently, nectar loses the water particles from it and finally honey is produced and ready to use.

The diagram depicts the seven steps of production of honey.

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