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Changes in roadways to access hospital

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Two maps illustrate roadways to the lity hospital of which is 2007 and 2010 two different years. maps shoal developments that took flas in three years. In 2004, Cal harking of hospital staff and sublic were together. By 2010, public parking Seprately was constructed in the last side, beside to the City hospital and also a new bus statioyn was made with two roundabouts which links up to it the station. The bus stop in 2007 were parallel to each other in West and east side with the hospital in between. The city hospital is surrounded by ring road and remained unearthed Major Changes were with two roundabouts on hospital road, parking and bus station
Two maps illustrate roadways to the
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lity
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hospital
of which is 2007 and 2010 two
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different
years.

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maps
shoal developments that took
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flas
in three years. In 2004, Cal harking of
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hospital
staff and
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sublic
were together. By 2010, public parking
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Seprately
was constructed
in the last side, beside to the City
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hospital
and
also
a new bus
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statioyn
was made
with two roundabouts which links up to it the station. The bus
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stop
in 2007 were parallel to each other in West and east side with the
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hospital
in between.

The city
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hospital
is surrounded
by ring road and remained unearthed Major
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Changes
were with two roundabouts on
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hospital
road, parking and bus station
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IELTS academic Changes in roadways to access hospital

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
114 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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