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the pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year,2016. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The given pie charts outline the incomes and expenses of children’s donations in the USA in the certain year 2016. overall Overall, the highest income earned from food donation and maximum money spent on providing services related to the program. Additionally, the total revenue was slightly more than the total expenses. body It is to notice that other sources of income contributed only 0. 4% which was minor more (0. 2%) than government grants and investment income ( 0. 2%). Moreover, the latter sources of income accounted for the same percentage of income in total revenue that was 0. 2%. There was the second contributor (Community contributor) which generated around 10. 4% and it was near about 8% more than program revenue (2. 2%). The donated food was a major source for charity and it was generated above 86%. Further, the main part of the money was spent on the services of the programs that was near about 96% of total expenditure. Just two other expenditure products, fundraising and management and general, representing 2. 6 percent and 1. 6 percent respectively, were eligible.
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pie charts outline the
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and expenses of children’s donations in the USA in the certain year 2016.

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overall


Overall
, the highest
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income
earned from food donation and maximum money spent on providing services related to the program.
Additionally
, the
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total
revenue was
slightly
more than the
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total
expenses.

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body


It is to notice that other sources of
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income
contributed
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only
0. 4% which was minor more (0. 2%) than
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government
grants and investment
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income
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(
0. 2%).
Moreover
, the latter sources of
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income
accounted for the same percentage of
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income
in
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total
revenue that was 0. 2%. There was the second contributor (Community contributor) which generated around 10. 4% and it was near about 8% more than program revenue (2. 2%). The donated food was a major source for charity and it
was generated
above 86%.

Further
, the main part of the money
was spent
on the services of the programs that was near about 96% of
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total
expenditure.
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two other expenditure products, fundraising and management and general, representing 2. 6 percent and 1. 6 percent
respectively
, were eligible.
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IELTS academic the pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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