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The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today.

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The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today. Globally, 65% of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance, constituting 35% and 30% respectively. A further 28% of global degradation is due to over-cultivation of crops. Other causes account for only 7% collectively. These causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s, with Europe having as much as 9. 8% of degradation due to deforestation, while the impact of this on Oceania and North America was minimal, with only 1. 7% and 0. 2% of land affected respectively. Europe, with the highest overall percentage of land degraded (23%), also suffered from over-cultivation (7. 7%) and over-grazing (5. 5%). In contrast, Oceania had 13% of degraded farmland and this was mainly due to over-grazing (11. 3%). North America had a lower proportion of degraded land at only 5%, and the main causes of this were over-cultivation (3. 3%) and, to a lesser extent, over-grazing (1. 5%). Overall, it is clear that Europe suffered more from farmland degradation than the other regions and the main causes there were deforestation and over-cultivation.
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of farmland becoming degraded in the world
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of this were over-cultivation (3. 3%) and, to a lesser extent, over-grazing (1. 5%).

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that Europe suffered more from farmland
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than the other regions and the main
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there were deforestation and over-cultivation.

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