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The pie chart shows energy sector in USA

The pie chart shows energy sector in USA NVynm

The pie chart illustrate the percentage of energy sources in the United States of America from 1980 to 1990. Overall, it is clearly seen that the availability of nuclear power and coal had been increased sharply in the 10 year period. However, the consumption of oil and nuclear gas were decline sharply. In 1980, 42% of oil was stock to produce energy while, the conception of fuel was significantly decreased at 33%. The generate energy buy used of natural gas which was utilised at 26%. In addition, the proposition was similar approximately to generate energy by natural gas in 1990. Other sources were utilised for energy production and it was coal, hydroelectric power and nuclear power. The demand of coal was grown from 22 % in 1980 to 27% in 1990. In this decade, hydroelectric power demand was similar at 5%. The production of energy which use nuclear energy was doubled in this time period.

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seen
 that the availability of nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
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 and coal had been increased
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The generate
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energy
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buy
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used
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. The demand of coal was grown
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power
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energy
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