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Percentage of people who own the devices from 2010 to 2025

Percentage of people who own the devices from 2010 to 2025 W58DN

The chart indicates the number of people who possess the devices from 2010 to 2025 in percentage. If we want to start to start from the beginning of demands in this chart, at first, we can At first it can be observed laptop higher than others plus smart watch in the last category in 2010. On the other hand, the change is appeared in 2020, while laptop has lost its popularity and smartphone has overcome it. Eventually Smartphone has become the most popular device in 2025 compared with smart watch which has been the least requested at all times. In overview, the popularity of smartphones is at its peak, while the trend for tablets is stable, and the smartwatch is the least popular, and it is only the use of laptops that is decreased.

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 who possess the devices from 2010 to 2025 in percentage.

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watch
 in the last category in 2010.

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IELTS academic Percentage of people who own the devices from 2010 to 2025

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